For this crit we presented our three boards and talked through our concept, method of delivery and production ideas. With us in the crit was a small group of peers, two tutors and two third year students. Here are our boards:
We talked through our boards and explained our proposed idea. This is the feedback we received:
- Actually doing processes - Screen printing etc.
- Could add info about where/how/prices in a friendly way?
- Useful
- How are you going to bind/Are you going to bind?
- Research - Have you asked other first years?
- Trial different stocks in publication. Write what it is, price? Where from? etc.
- Good, professional
- What processes are you going to use?
- Are you planning on attaining content from all year groups?
- Reason behind formats
- Informative tone
- Good that it can be used throughout the whole year
- Experiment with some different stocks
- Summarising of first year
- Progression - Questionnaires - Examples of student work
- Colour - Type - Layout
- Good that we're thinking about categorising
- Definitely screen print, explore processes - bookbinding
- Very well thought out
- Exploration of format is good
- Blogs page is good
- Explore as many many processes and resources as possible
- Tone of voice - Where would the content come from?
- Manufacturing/Production
- Leeds university for binding


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